tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post5442974097299625647..comments2023-09-05T07:29:13.338-07:00Comments on The Raven + The Writer: The Snow Daughter; Part IEvelynhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11130656303566915681noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-84911972100689887542014-02-20T08:11:13.867-08:002014-02-20T08:11:13.867-08:00Oh yay! I love it when stories flow from your hand...Oh yay! I love it when stories flow from your hand to the paper-that's the best! Hope you enjoy mine when you do read it! I know how it is to be busy, so don't feel obligated though. :)Nataliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00315660089925645214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-40228227036636938312014-02-19T16:02:30.590-08:002014-02-19T16:02:30.590-08:00I'm so sorry for the late reply Natalie!!
Tha...I'm so sorry for the late reply Natalie!!<br /><br />Thank you bunches! I'm glad you like it, even though as I go back and re-read now - I think it needs some editing. :) As for the plot, I'm really excited about it. For the most part it's been really flowing together by itself. (for the most part mind you, haha)<br /><br />I really want, and need to read yours! I noticed that you posted part 2 and 3. I'm pretty busy, but I hope to find some time soon to read it!!Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130656303566915681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-78668731738560148402014-02-01T12:44:43.412-08:002014-02-01T12:44:43.412-08:00Oh wow. This is an absolutely breathtaking story. ...Oh wow. This is an absolutely breathtaking story. I'm sorry it took me so long to read it and comment! I was going to, but I forgot. :( Then, just as I was going to work on MY story from the blog party (yes, I was the co-host of the party and I still haven't finished my story yet!) I remembered that you had posted yours. :) So here I am!<br />I'm really looking forward to part 2! I love your style of writing and your plot-it's so creative!! It's such a shame you didn't write it in time for the contest! :(Nataliehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00315660089925645214noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-4289961042000307162014-01-29T15:13:13.054-08:002014-01-29T15:13:13.054-08:00yeah I understand :) and it wasn't a huge deal...yeah I understand :) and it wasn't a huge deal, I just noticed it becuase I have issues with the same thing :) But who knows? maybe someday you'll be an amazing like C.S. Lewis and nobody will care that your wordy (he is haha) so yeah, not a big deal :) haha I always feel like I am blowing things out of proportion when I give advice like this..... anyway.... Good Job!!Gavrielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09675329139762421069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-60536450471611356082014-01-28T16:34:10.747-08:002014-01-28T16:34:10.747-08:00Thank you!!! Yes I am planning on finishing it - i...Thank you!!! Yes I am planning on finishing it - in fact a lot of my free time is going into it. :)Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130656303566915681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-81355532086952354672014-01-28T16:33:26.132-08:002014-01-28T16:33:26.132-08:00I mean *I*, not 'u'. :)I mean *I*, not 'u'. :) Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130656303566915681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-30938699103416504902014-01-28T16:12:43.031-08:002014-01-28T16:12:43.031-08:00Ash! I loved it! Please finish it!! =) Its amazing...Ash! I loved it! Please finish it!! =) Its amazing... Are you planning to finish it?<br />Miss Elspeth Binnernoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-20901275112447323172014-01-28T13:31:50.656-08:002014-01-28T13:31:50.656-08:00Thank you, Gavriel!! And thanks for the advice - I...Thank you, Gavriel!! And thanks for the advice - I'll see if I can go back and change it to be less wordy. I think that probably happened because I'm always worried I'm rushing the story to much. :)Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130656303566915681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-9647101222435235232014-01-28T13:28:45.230-08:002014-01-28T13:28:45.230-08:00Thank you!! I'm looking forward to when you ge...Thank you!! I'm looking forward to when you get more of the book you're writing posted on your blog!Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130656303566915681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-75474728768895186012014-01-28T13:27:12.435-08:002014-01-28T13:27:12.435-08:00Thank you, Anna! I was disappointed as well that u...Thank you, Anna! I was disappointed as well that u didn't finish it in time. Maybe working on it longer than planned will make it better. :)Evelynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11130656303566915681noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-83533003906962961412014-01-28T09:30:07.834-08:002014-01-28T09:30:07.834-08:00This is great Eva! I really liked it :) one sugges...This is great Eva! I really liked it :) one suggestion that I had, take it or leave it, is that you could make it a tad bit less wordy, but overall I thought it was good and I'm looking forward to reading the rest :) Good Job!Gavrielhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09675329139762421069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-5544550539794941912014-01-28T08:28:19.819-08:002014-01-28T08:28:19.819-08:00That was lovely, Evelyn!
~ Grace AnnaThat was lovely, Evelyn!<br />~ Grace AnnaAnna Catherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01780472343631804815noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7946488663028420074.post-67636359036061548122014-01-28T02:36:29.050-08:002014-01-28T02:36:29.050-08:00Wow. This story is awesome! It's a shame it wa...Wow. This story is awesome! It's a shame it was too late for the competition. Well done, Evelyn! Annahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04601763756191767407noreply@blogger.com